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Kiera's Story

Mon Jul 13, 2009, 12:26 AM
  • Mood: Joy
  • Listening to: The news in the background x]
  • Reading: The Harry Potter Series (again b/c of the movie)
  • Watching: The 10:00 o'clock news
  • Playing: nothing?? playing what? an instrument you mean?
  • Eating: Kettle Corn
  • Drinking: Diet Coke mmmm
Ok, so for the first time on deviantart.com I attempted to write a piece that will soon lead to bondage and has the topic of Erotic. I Really hope it will be everything i imagined and hoped it would be. I just wrote the first part of the story, and it contained no mature or strict content in it.
I have also been wondering if I should or should not write the story in 2 points of view.

1. I was thinking i could write chapter 1 in the main character's (Kiera) perspective. Then go back and write it in the antagonist's perspective (the kidnapper-like character, whatever you wish to call him). I was thinking it would be a fun idea.

2. Or what i could do is write the first chapter in Kiera's perspective, the second chapter in the kidnapper's perspective and the pattern would continue...
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Im leaning more toward the first option but am not too sure. Please if your reading this then end me a note, or leave a message on my page. Thanks for reading this. I will continue to write journal entries as I continue writing this series. In your comments leave any thoughts about my 1st part anywhere you want, as long as I get it.
Thanks thanks thanks!
~n28734

P.S.
I will not be writing this in a quickly styled manner, sorry. As almost all of us do, we have a life outside or deviantart.com :gasp: i know x]
That was just an fyi, thats it :]
ovwah for know ;)

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    :iconguardian457:
    Thanks for watching.
    :iconjaktherenegade:
    Thanks for the watch.

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    Matt Farrell: [To Lucy McClane] Wow, I know that tone. It's just weird hearing it come from someone... with hair.

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    :iconphantomdotexe:
    Warmest greetings, my dear compatriot. I would like to sincerely thank you for your enjoyment of my work.

    :icondragonshy2:

    I hop that I will get the chance to discuss it with you soon! ^o^

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    :iconphantomdotexe:
    Warmest greetings, my dear compatriot. I would like to sincerely thank you for your enjoyment of my work.

    :icondragonshy2:

    I hop that I will get the chance to discuss it with you soon! ^o^

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    :iconphantomdotexe:
    Warmest greetings, my dear compatriot. I would like to sincerely thank you for your enjoyment of my work.

    :icondragonshy2:

    I hop that I will get teh chance to discuss it with you soon! ^o^

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    :iconneko28734:
    your welcome :]
    what is to discuss? :o
    :iconphantomdotexe:
    Well, you +fav'd my work.... and I am very happy! Which one did you like, and why?

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    :iconneko28734:
    oh, umm...its something about "phantom" meeting an evil doctor? i cannot remember the name right now. sorry >.<
    :iconphantomdotexe:
    Ah, not to worry. Do you remember what made it so special? I love getting constructive criticism!

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